|Posted by godaironin on August 23, 2011 at 3:25 PM|
After several months on a self-imposed hiatus, the Blue Rose project is back on-line again. My main critic Haru gave me a detailed run-down on what worked and what didn't for Blue Rose 2 and some edits will be in order to the story. Those edits should be posted to this site and to FFN by the end of the month).
The majority of the changes will excise the more "military" aspects of the story, reducing sections that probably are more suitable for something written by Dale Brown than for an Evangelion FanFic. The core of the story was well received, however, and remains intact. She especially liked the action sequences so that was encouraging.
Following the re-editing of BR2 I will revisit the outline of BR3 and cut down the scope a bit. Haru gave me several ideas on how to focus the story better and we'll take that approach to the finale. I expect that BR3 will be at least as long as BR2 and I won't see a completion until the end of 2012 (with a target completion date of Dec 20,2012, so at least if the world ends I'll have my story done :D)