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The Blue Rose
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After a considerable amount of effort, the re-write of BFOS is finished. The story has been re-titled The Blue Rose, for reasons that will become obvious once you read the story.
This was a significant re-working on the story. While the basic plot remains the same as the original, I added many scenes, and worked in more background to all of the American characters to enhance the story, as well as lay a foundation for more work down the road. All in all, the story expanded by two whole chapters, and probably 25% more text in general, plus nearly everything was revisited or re-written to some degree.
The version posted here is "next to final," meaning that have a couple of others who are editing and giving me detailed comments on the re-write. Once I receive that feedback, and feedback from the rest of the readers, I'll make whatever edits are required and then post a final version to the various Fan Fic sites, as well as re-post it here.
If you've read Boyfriend of Steel already, I do encourage you to read The Blue Rose, as there's a lot more story added. Please drop me a line with any comments, critiques, etc., as its always appreciated.
This was a significant re-working on the story. While the basic plot remains the same as the original, I added many scenes, and worked in more background to all of the American characters to enhance the story, as well as lay a foundation for more work down the road. All in all, the story expanded by two whole chapters, and probably 25% more text in general, plus nearly everything was revisited or re-written to some degree.
The version posted here is "next to final," meaning that have a couple of others who are editing and giving me detailed comments on the re-write. Once I receive that feedback, and feedback from the rest of the readers, I'll make whatever edits are required and then post a final version to the various Fan Fic sites, as well as re-post it here.
If you've read Boyfriend of Steel already, I do encourage you to read The Blue Rose, as there's a lot more story added. Please drop me a line with any comments, critiques, etc., as its always appreciated.
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